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@Warryarus, you can't mark this as translated when there's clearly a bunch of legible text left untranslated in the fourth panel.

MarqFJA87 said in comment #2616600:

@Warryarus, you can't mark this as translated when there's clearly a bunch of legible text left untranslated in the fourth panel.

How about now?

Warryarus said in comment #2617347:

How about now?

There's still some untranslated text remaining. Yes, most of it is just sound effects, but the ones in the speech bubbles could be mistaken for actual dialogue by people that can't read Japanese.

Even if some users don't consider sound effects to be very important, I believe you should translate as many as you can. They add atmosphere, they're not always intuitive, and including them ensures users aren't wondering if there's anything important missing. And besides, if you're going to translate a post, you might as well be thorough.

Blank_User said in comment #2617364:

There's still some untranslated text remaining. Yes, most of it is just sound effects, but the ones in the speech bubbles could be mistaken for actual dialogue by people that can't read Japanese.

Even if some users don't consider sound effects to be very important, I believe you should translate as many as you can. They add atmosphere, they're not always intuitive, and including them ensures users aren't wondering if there's anything important missing. And besides, if you're going to translate a post, you might as well be thorough.

I'm really not good with onomatopoeias, much less Japanese ones. That's why I often avoid doing them, only doing those I've seen other translators using.

Warryarus said in comment #2617670:

I'm really not good with onomatopoeias, much less Japanese ones. That's why I often avoid doing them, only doing those I've seen other translators using.

If you need some help, you could check out the List of SFX.

Zanni’s breasts are truly huge and firm. Even if I suck on them and drink her breast milk all day long, I refuse to let go. Even when my stomach is completely full I keep drinking. I fuck her nonstop, turning that nutrient-rich breast milk into hot semen and pumping it deep into her womb.

I have no personality and I must larp

TheArtistManTrung said in comment #2616315:

She look like a Berber woman in Algeria. I like her look, btw.

WWTNoise said in comment #2616150:

Why are her ears so low in comparison to her eyes? It's like someone moved her face up without touching her ears.

I've not been able to un-see it since it was pointed out to me, so now nobody else can either.

TheArtistManTrung said in comment #2616315:

She look like a Berber woman in Algeria. I like her look, btw.

That's a bad colorization, the Amazigh aren't that dark, that's more of a Tuareg skin tone (the people who the Fremen from Dune are based on). Algerie herself does look like she could be Amazigh though.

Now this is what a real shipgirl supposed to be.

Shebadotfr said in comment #2616264:

At least Algerie don't have an embarrassing alternate universe counterpart lmao

Then who's this? (Refer to post #3918639; can't embed sensitive image as comment to general post).

MaskedAvenger said in comment #2616564:

Then who's this? (Refer to post #3918639; can't embed sensitive image as comment to general post).

Not embarrassing.

So apparently behind this hefty girl and Hie Maru is everybody's favorite"17-year-old".

(apparently revealed today, found out thru Reddit)