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And that wraps this up. There are some extra scenes like a bath scene, an IF scenario if the trainer made a different choice, and an extended epilogue, those are in the paid doujins that are linked in the commentary.

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benzene7 said:

And that wraps this up. There are some extra scenes like a bath scene, an IF scenario if the trainer made a different choice, and an extended epilogue, those are in the paid doujins that are linked in the commentary.

Damm, I was hoping for an epiloque or aftermath, but this is awesome doujin anyway

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One thing I learned from the author's notes in the doujin is that the prologue actually takes place not at the beginning of the story, but actually AFTER her complete disappearance from the world and shortly before the ending. So Machan isn't stuck in some purgatory while Trainer is un-musuming the umamusumes, she was actually still living in Tracen by herself, sending voice memos every day to Trainer until one day, the manga of her becomes popular enough that her recorded message finally reaches his phone.

From the third page of the prologue at least she gets to peek on Trainer's progress with his manga, so she's aware he remembered her otherwise it must be terrible to live completely invisible for a few months like that.

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Revision (wrt reverting parenting and duplicate tag addition): shading on the stomach is slightly different in this compared to the other post, which comes from the artist's Discord from much earlier in the day (about 11 hours ago from this comment at the time of writing). This visual difference makes the files not the same, whereas other files uploaded there are normally pixel-perfect duplicates.

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Basically child porn, should be banned. Huh? Two downvotes? And as a wise senator says: "You should try fighting for what you believe in sometime, Jack. Not for a company, or for a nation, or for anyone else."
Now three? and as a wise insurrectionist said: "Keep it coming!"
"They hated Jesus because he told them the truth."

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Blingblingboy6 said in comment #2589588:

Basically child porn, should be banned. Huh? Two downvotes? And as a wise senator says: "You should try fighting for what you believe in sometime, Jack. Not for a company, or for a nation, or for anyone else."
Now three? and as a wise insurrectionist said: "Keep it coming!"
"They hated Jesus because he told them the truth."

Bro crashing out on an imageboard that also allow toddlercon 😂

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From this and the other character profiles, we can estimate the character's ages.

Yui is a university student, so he's most likely no younger than 18. Moyu is stated to be 3 years younger, Nitori 5 years younger, and Fumi 7 years younger.

Kanan is Nitori's classmate, so they're probably the same age. That would make Kanan's sister, Kanon, the same age as Fumi, and those two seem to be classmates as well. Fumi and Kanon don't wear school uniforms, meaning they're in elementary school, so they're no older than 12. But if Yui is no younger than 18, then Fumi and Kanon can't be younger than 11. This gives us the following age ranges: