see if the edited version work better

Didn't someone already posted an edited version of this page before?

Is that so?
If this page has been post before,flag mine for deletion then

nope. someone posted a portion of this page, but not the whole thing.

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Translated, but I'm worried about the line "咲夜が私相手に長期戦を挑むなんて思わないわ". Is it "Sakuya ga (watashi aite ni choukisen wo idomu nante) omowanai wa", indicating what Sakuya thinks, or is there an implied "私は" at the beginning, making it "Watashi ha ((Sakuya ga watashi aite) ni choukisen wo idomu nante) omowanai wa", indicating what Remilia thinks? Requesting assistance. (Does anyone ever actually check the check_translation tag?)

Isn't it rather that Remilia knew that Sakuya wouldn't last against her in a drawn-out battle, so she knew she would do an all-out attack?

Right, that was what I meant by the second option. Fixed.

I don't know much about the accuracy of the translation but, I do know this: From an english standpoint, the previous translation of Sakuya's ending speech (after the kiss) was a lot stronger. When she spoke about how she was afraid Remi would be tainted by her desires and such.

Is there a way to go back to it or was the previous translation so far off the mark that it doesn't even beg consideration?