Thank you very much for all the corrections,Ryouko However, about what Reimu said in the last dialog, I would still insist on "YUKKURI SHITEITTE NE" instead of "Take it easy". I think that's the point of the whole story, although Reimu didn't turn to that Yukkuri Shiteitte Ne thing, she was speaking like them.
An afterword-called explanation
Hi everyone, greetings to those I'd never met before, I am Pangea, thanks for buying my book.
Since I cannot figure out a nice story this time, I have chosed to follow the tide, sorry about that （ノд‘）
I thought some people might already figured out that the title Yukkuri Balloon was came from Head Ballon by Ito Junji. Because I believe that even if I used the Yukkuri neta the comic will still appeared to be an old-fashioned one, so I decided to make a horror comic after I read Head Balloon. However, it turns out that my comic has became a nondescript one....lol
Due to the space limit the story has been cut a lot shorter, I may have to train myself more on my ability of creating orz
Actually, the original heroine of this story was Youmu. However, based on this ending, Marisa was the most suitable one after all.
Hope you could like the story.
I was working on the application for the Summer Comiket, if I'm lucky then I'll meet you there.
That's it.Colophon
Name: Yuukuri Balloon
Artist: Deep Slow / Pangea
First Edition: 2008.05.25 The 5th Reidai Fesitival of Hakurei Shrine
Press: Cat's tail sama
HP: http://www12.ocn.ne.jp/~pangea/
Mail pangea45@hotmail.com
We welcome all the comments and suggestionsYUKKURI SHITEITTE NE....
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