Very interesting view. But there seems to be too much to the right of her. I personally would like a kinky version with her cloths kind of lifted here and there; perhaps a closer view focusing on her butt.

dadadies said:

But there seems to be too much to the right of her.

See the Rule of Thirds. Placing the subject off-center is one of the most basic techniques artists use to make images more visually interesting.

Also, literally nobody but you cares about how you would like to see more sex appeal added to a perfectly good drawing.