Ooichi can't cope with this level of Innocence.

Hiei is too honest about her feelings.

That smile is not fair!

Hiei smile = killer of thousand. All right time to call the government it seems i'm gonna need a lot more body bags than I though.

Oh.
She said it

Does Kouji sometimes make revisions of their work?

Beautiful Smile anyone?

*cringe

Isn't it more on the overwhelmed/blown away side of タジ than the negative-connotated 'cringe'?

"Enemy severely damaged!"

Goddamn, kiddo Hiei, GODDAMN.

Paracite said:

Isn't it more on the overwhelmed/blown away side of タジ than the negative-connotated 'cringe'?

Yeah, but "Overwhelmed" seemed too long and not punchy enough for the effect. Judgment call, but you can alter it if you like.

Cringe is just too negative to really fit for me - went with 'whoa' for a similar effect.

Paracite said:

Cringe is just too negative to really fit for me - went with 'whoa' for a similar effect.

Works for me.

Moonspeaker said:

Works for me.

Would dazed apply here?

Jarlath said:

Would dazed apply here?

A subtle 'shock' would do.

Splitting the difference with a 'falter'!

Light cruiser armor is not able to stand up to firepower of that magnitude.

Even knowing the context of the story, seeing hearts in eyes in too many artworks on Danbooru and Pixiv makes me too uneasy to just go along with that being "innocent"...

NWSiaCB said:

Even knowing the context of the story, seeing hearts in eyes in too many artworks on Danbooru and Pixiv makes me too uneasy to just go along with that being "innocent"...

On the other hand... it's Hiei. Hiei. And THIS Hiei in specific.

So... what's going on with the <pre> tag in the note?

... Beautiful Smile, but with heart-shaped pupils that are more typical of being love-crazed. Is that normal?