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For the first two, I don't see any big flaws. Yes, the breasts are a bit off and the crotch might look weird, but nothing really bad that it should be deleted.
The other one is a complete other thing, though. Tiny neck, compared to the torso and then those breasts with nipples where they should't be. These two things give all these four posts a weirs look, although the face per so and the body below the breasts is more than just o.k.
The faces for both of them are just terrible. I don't think perspective is supposed to work that way. Also, what the hell is wrong with Hamakaze's upper back?
vivoleko01 said:
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First one is mediocre looking but not really that bad. The second one reaches much lower than the standards of this website. All I can say about the third one are the faces. They don't feel right. The fourth one involves disproportionately short forearms and bad hands and the fifth one not only has bad hands but the art style just looks juvenile.
nanami said:
First one doesn't seem to have much wrong with it. Looks fine. Second one looks falls below mediocre. Lines are too straight, the face is bad, and the coloring is the kind associated with such posts. As for the third, I'm guessing You's arm is too small along with the rest of her body?
Chimera99 said:
What are those things below her breasts supposed to be? Hands? Where is her torso? What kind of monster is she?
Chimera99 said:
The first one has wonky arms in bottom left panel and its just not amazing artwork. Second one just looks wrong to me. The body doesnt feel like it's drawn correctly
Well, by the first one the parent got approved because it hides this post's flaws: The stomach looks like it has been punched several times, giving it a weird inward bulge. This doesn't seem to fit with the legs.
The second one: Bad foreshoretening. The feet look multiple meters away from the torso
Last one: Weird coloring. This looks pretty much like the artist throw in some shades of brown, but with no real shading. This looks more like mud than clothing or hair.
Provence said:
Well, by the first one the parent got approved because it hides this post's flaws: The stomach looks like it has been punched several times, giving it a weird inward bulge. This doesn't seem to fit with the legs.
The second one: Bad foreshoretening. The feet look multiple meters away from the torso
Last one: Weird coloring. This looks pretty much like the artist throw in some shades of brown, but with no real shading. This looks more like mud than clothing or hair.
The ribs are also too small for the body, leaving the breasts looking like they're attached to the shoulders instead of the chest.