vivoleko01 said:
It feels like a hidamari sketch trace.
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vivoleko01 said:
It feels like a hidamari sketch trace.
Münster said:
Oh well, since I'm here....
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The first one has a terrifying torso problem. The second one also has a torso problem, in addition to the redhead's right boob being nonexistent. The shoulders in the third one don't match the position of her torso and the fourth one is questionable to me in its quality. I'd say it's the best of the bunch you presented but aside from the unappealing shading, I can't put my finger on it.
tapnek said:
The first one has a terrifying torso problem. The second one also has a torso problem, in addition to the redhead's right boob being nonexistent. The shoulders in the third one don't match the position of her torso and the fourth one is questionable to me in its quality. I'd say it's the best of the bunch you presented but aside from the unappealing shading, I can't put my finger on it.
That's ok with me. I did hesitate to post here because all of these posts are good enough to get deleted^^. These four are...the best of them, but it won't budge me if nothing will happen, so we'll see. So..thanks.
vivoleko01 said:
Overall, that's the sort of average artstyle I wouldn't approve. They're not terrible, but there's nothing special about them, either.
vivoleko01 said:
The first is in the Zun style, but not particularly strong an example.
The second is simply amateur, something a new artist would make.
Consider lurking a bit more and getting to know which artists produce consistently great work, and get used to the idea of hunting a bit more for better art.
vivoleko01 said:
The line work is simple, the proportions are clumsy, the shading makes the characters look flat, and they're drawn in uninteresting poses (unless having an unnaturally-bent leg counts as interesting). Yes, the parent post was approved; but the problems are worse in the lower halves of the bodies, which aren't included in the parent.
vivoleko01 said:
Her clothes and skin look like they're made of the same glossy material (poor shading), and the rips are really unnatural. Her left hand looks weird and her lower legs look really short compared to her thighs (like the artist was trying to foreshorten and failed; also notice how one thigh is longer and skinnier than the other). There's a giant bulge between her left shoulder and breast. Finally, something seems really off about her position (how far over her butt is swung); but maybe that's just from looking at her too long.