but I don't know if it's frowned upon to copy it to notes here if I can't personally verify its accuracy.
Good call. It's absolutely preferred to leave it up to someone that understands the language, especially with big multi-page posts like this. We don't have a way to track and vet translation sources for authenticity so the e-hentai source could be a MTL slop translation for example.
Though it is possible to copy translations if you are absolutely certain it came from an acclaimed translator. A name you see often in the comments is TheParacite. If you do so, make sure to leave a comment where the translation came from.
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