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yakumo yukari, saigyouji yuyuko, hijiri byakuren, yagokoro eirin, and yasaka kanako (touhou) drawn by diisuke

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    【GW超同人祭】幻想妄想総集編【サンプル】

    5月1日・2日にメロンブックス様で開催されるGW超同人祭https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/feature/detail.php?feature_id=2212合わせで出る東方同人誌まとめ本です。再録にあたって一部加筆修正した「温泉でボインボイン姉貴達に勃起を見せつける本」pixiv #32185691 »　「牛チチけーね先生の身体”で”性教育in寺子屋」pixiv #37450988 »　「ひじりんがショタのデカチンに欲情する話」pixiv #40366984 »　「ひじりんが男湯で酷い目に遭う本」pixiv #51415107 »　以上4冊と、温泉本の描き下ろし10Pを収録。

    5月1日にはCircle Edenのスペースで（僕は居ません）定価よりちょっと安く手に入るので、可能であれば現地に足を運んで頂けると嬉しいですが、こんなご時世ですのでもちろん通販もありまぁす！！　メロンブックス様　https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=904387　とらのあな様　https://ec.toranoana.jp/tora_r/ec/item/040030903321/

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    BajinMuu
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    Ok, so I think I speak for everyone when I say that we were baited into thinking it was a New Doujin. But alas, I’ll judge the new art we did get.

    Artwork: 8-9/10. Things look well drawn and expressions are delightful. Anatomy is a bit off but nothing two jarring.

    Story: 3/10. A brief continuation of the last doujin and I can’t read Japanese, so…

    Dialogue: Can’t read it.

    Panel Layout: 4-5/10. 50% of these shots are two panels and two of them are wide shots, so really only one does anything remotely interesting.

    Length 1-3/10 Ten Pages and 6 of them don’t even feature penetration.

    Overall, these 10 pages, while nice are quite lackluster and don’t really do much but flaunt the stellar artwork. Also, the lack of penetration, as well as it’s length make it more of a short comic than a doujin.

    Final score: 2/5 Artwork saves it but pretty much everything else is pointless.

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