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hayakawa tazuna and akikawa yayoi (umamusume) drawn by wakkigen

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    This Is a Story That Predates the Founding of the Academy

    理事長二代目やん。って話なんですけど、
    一代目の名義だけ父親にしてた的な感じでどうか一つお許しください。

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    NNescio
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    @Yoshiciv
    Look, "yume no tsuzuki" when used as part of a sentence is hard to translate "literally" without making the reader go "huh?" Seriously, "following the continuation of dream", really? Even the grammar's completely off!

    Reverting to my earlier translation. If I have time I'll try to figure out something that adheres closer to the original sentence structure and literal individual definitions of each component word. But as it stands my earlier TL is far better than your... attempt, so a reversion is in order.

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    Yoshiciv
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    NNescio said:

    @Yoshiciv
    Look, "yume no tsuzuki" when used as part of a sentence is hard to translate "literally" without making the reader go "huh?" Seriously, "following the continuation of dream", really? Even the grammar's completely off!

    Reverting to my earlier translation. If I have time I'll try to figure out something that adheres closer to the original sentence structure and literal individual definitions of each component word. But as it stands my earlier TL is far better than your... attempt, so a reversion is in order.

    OK. Thank you for the explanation.

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