Kyero said: maybe because one artest colored and another did the lineart. the lineart person is quite new to this type of body.
I probably wouldn't mind the line art of the body if there was some actual line weight to it. It's all just one uniform line width. If that is the case, they certainly are new to art in general, though they have a decent knack for it if anything. They need to work more with their lines then, that would help out the overall work, otherwise they need to work on anatomy so they can actually draw the hands and feet. Not to mention the waist is wafer thin, but I'll just leave that to personal taste.