Chuuni-ing it up again, I see.

Though more like an American/British comic book chuuni instead of the usual one. Which is why I took the opportunity to turn it into a Green Lantern reference.

Original: "The Twin Eyes of the Hawk (Hawkeyes) does not overlook evil deeds, no matter what they may be.
When a favored customer from our shop is in a pinch, our eyes (become) especially discerning. (lit. our eyes become especially sharp)."

Though yeah, this butchers most of the 'poetic' appeal of the original.