Played with the font type for Kaga-chan's speech to make it cuter.
Appreciated, but the font size was rather excessive in panel 2, the final sound effect's color choice got messed up, and the "g" in that note dropped down past the edge of the note box (at least in Firefox on a Mac; that last problem might be platform- and/or browser-dependent). The formatting can also be done within a single tag, just for future reference.
Also, Kaga doesn't use any childish speech inflections or impediments in her first line in panel 2, so using "lookie" felt a bit excessive. (I've heard kids say "lookit" when they want you to look at something, but the only times I've heard/seen "lookie" used by anyone have been as a cutesy affectation (played straight or ironic) by adults.)
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