This is my first time on here translating. I'm still practicing Japanese, so it might be wrong, but I'm sure they are close.

b4z73rd said:

This is my first time on here translating. I'm still practicing Japanese, so it might be wrong, but I'm sure they are close.

@b4z73rd
They were indeed pretty close. Take a look at the tweaks I've made and let me know if there's any of them you don't follow.