You really don't have to note what you changed. Translators up on Danbooru often make mistakes, even greatest ones. So you just need to fix it. And I thank you for what you did.
Nn hah!I just realized something important!Wha, what is it!?Kyaaa♡A kiss, perhaps!?I'm not letting you do so, you hear!?Nothing's going to start... On top of that, what can you even do given this situation?This isn't a locked room either...I'm in a locked room with Satsuki-chan, just the two of us! Would an event start here!?