I don't like the second and third notes in panel 1. They're awkward as hell, and the third one is probably actually wrong. Anyone care to fix them?
Hepas!! Hepas! Hepas!HEPAAAS!!
It's the world of the dead,
so the living can't get in or out.Ohh!?
Dan, is that you!?
You're still alive!?
Wait…
Well I didn't see it, but somehow…Eh? But didn't you just say she's over there?Good morning, Prusena. We've come to take you home.Rue! is this where you've been!?
