Say Lunatic6, do you plan on uploading the "Making off" or should I do it ?

Man... My arms hurt, hope I got the most of them right.. Long doujin is long.
My butt gone numb, that's what you get for sitting in one place for 9 hours, I guess...

Stan-Miller said:

Man... My arms hurt, hope I got the most of them right.. Long doujin is long.
And yeah! Upload the loopers, Lunatic! Those are funny!

Good job, Stan-Miller !
Yours was much better than the one from E-Hentai (it must be because it was translated from the Chinese scan).
This manga is truly a masterpiece.

Except for the numerous grammar mistakes littered everywhere, your translation was pretty good.
I went through the pool again to fix missing plurals, incorrect past/present tenses, and minor phrasing issues, I hope you don't mind.

Still, good work and thanks for the translation!

echo591 said:

Except for the numerous grammar mistakes littered everywhere, your translation was pretty good.
I went through the pool again to fix missing plurals, incorrect past/present tenses, and minor phrasing issues, I hope you don't mind.

Still, good work and thanks for the translation!

Thanks for fixing the translation.
You have to forgive me, for English is not my 1st language, and i'm still learning both Japanese and English. Because of that, I always have to depend on 1 or 2 proofreader to fix my mistakes.