LittleFuzzy said: The dialogue is confusing; it took me more than one re-read before I got it. Her answer to "Where are you most sensitive?" is more like:
"The back of my knees.
... Hunh? You thought it would be my ears? I don't get why you would think a thing like that; did I misunderstand the question?"
Might that second bit be phrased as "No, not my ears. What gave you that idea?"
MemphisMastermind said: Might that second bit be phrased as "No, not my ears. What gave you that idea?"
I should have specified, I have no knowledge of moonrunes, so I don't know what's an accurate translation or not of what she says. However, the translation in place apparently confused a lot of us into thinking she was naming both the back of her knees and her ears as sensitive areas.
That said, your suggested phrasing is good. Maybe someone can check with the translator and see if that's accurate enough to use?
LittleFuzzy said: I should have specified, I have no knowledge of moonrunes, so I don't know what's an accurate translation or not of what she says. However, the translation in place apparently confused a lot of us into thinking she was naming both the back of her knees and her ears as sensitive areas.
That said, your suggested phrasing is good. Maybe someone can check with the translator and see if that's accurate enough to use?
You pretty much figured it out. I made what I think is as minimal a change as possible while still conveying the proper nuance. See if it reads better now.
Moonspeaker said: You pretty much figured it out. I made what I think is as minimal a change as possible while still conveying the proper nuance. See if it reads better now.
The tongue (lisp)The back of my knees. What, my ears? What might you be talking about?I don't have something like that.Don't have something like that... maybeMy eyes.I know that you can exploit such information, you know?You might make me end up liking you.
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