Panel 1: Sakuya: Here, for desert (Hai, kochira desaato no) Sakuya's Deluxe Bamboo Flower* Cake (Sakuya tokusei take no hana keeki desu wa)
Panel 2: Iku: sfx: Ooh- (Oo-...)
Panel 3: Iku: Wow, it's wonderful. Not even a full course meal of Heaven's peaches can compare. (Sugoi, subarashi desu. Tenkai no momo furu coosu to wa kurabemono ni narimasen ne)
Iku: sfx: yummy yummy (uma uma)**
Sakuya: Hehe, the service was pretty good too wasn't it? I'm not just some maid who's only good at cooking. Do you understand now? (Fufu, saabisu mo nakanaka no mono datta deshou? Watashi wa ryouri ga tokui na dake no meido jyanai no. Wakattemoraetakashira?)
Iku: Yes, it was very tasty (Hai, oishii desu)
Sakuya: ...do you really understand? (...hontou ni wakatteru?)
Panel 4: text: Harmonious (Wa ki ai ai)
Panel 5: Remilia: ... (... ... ... .)***
I'm not certain if this is correct.
I can't find the half-note symbol.
Why so many? </rhetorical>
BTW, I'm new to this. So, feel free to rip me apart.
I was aware of the translation notes. I just wanted to ask if someone could proof-read my translation. Sorry, I didn't explicitly state that in my earlier comment. I'm familiar with Japanese, but not so much that I'd get all the expressions. If you don't think there's anything wrong with it. I'll put the notes up later.
You could always just put up a check_translation in the tags. Its much easier that way for the next fansubber to come along. as well as easier for the non-japanese speakers to at least a gist of what the comic is talking about.
Somehow this page kinda has connections with Iku's victory line versus Sakuya in SWR... Just thinkin'.
Harmonious AtmosphereOooh...Yes, it was delicious.Wow, it's wonderful. Not even a full course meal of Heaven's peaches can compare.All right, here is dessert.Yummy YummyHehe, the service was pretty good too wasn't it? I'm not just some maid who's only good at cooking, you know? There's some context here about Iku's preconceptions of Sakuya that aren't clear. Perhaps a page before this one provides that context?...do you really understand?Sakuya's Deluxe Bamboo Flower Cake.