I think this could use a second set of eyes to makes sure it looks right, but it seems like she ran into battle alone and got busted up, but she wants fixed up so she can go night battle with the admiral one last time. It sounds like he's got some excuses though.
...I apologize for charging in alone, but...
no, sorry, sorry, ok?Moving on, I know you'll be doing a night battle now, so I'll go with you....ah That's right, you actually need to deliver something to Akashi for conversion before sunrise tomorrow....
Ah, yeah, I'm sure Ooyodo has it.For the time being, if you use a bucket on me, I should be able to make it...and you'll be able to... properly keep your promise......please fulfill my final selfish wish...