Can anyone try and check the translation, I copied the translation here.
If correct, translation credit to the reddit user.
The translation is competent overall. I've fixed up some minor punctuation issues (comma splices) and changed some of the wording to better reflect the subtle nuance (tone of speech, register, etc.) in the original Japanese. And filled in some of the untranslated bits (small out-of-balloon text and sfx, both of which are hard to typeset).